Tuesday, February 07, 2006

 

22/365 Maura

She was a girl with a hard shell, a rough laugh, a swaggering don’t-mess-with-me walk, wearing straight jeans when we were all awash in wet bellbottoms. She combed her frizzy hair straight for years. When she let her curls out by accident, everything else about her softened too.

Comments:
Brillant! Curls soften.
 
yeah, the softening as the end was a lovely way to wind it up, and great use of imagery
 
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